Talk:HMS Euphrates (1813)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 16:25, 29 December 2023 (UTC)

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Prose review

 * [...] and so more were needed to be built. Seems to me redundant.
 * Removed.


 * [...] Scamander class was one of those put into construction to fill this need. "one of those"? One of those what? I think some specificity or reduction is required here.
 * Removed.


 * As such Alpheus's class [...] whomst
 * Not sure what you mean here?
 * Alpheus isn't a name used before in the article; is this a ghost from a previous article? – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  01:14, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Haha I didn't even catch that when reading it through again! Yes, from a previous article for a ship of the class.


 * [...] a woman at Corfu. Suggest "on" Corfu, considering it's an island rather than a city.
 * Changed.


 * Ten days after receiving the first news of Exmouth [...] Suggest "first despatch", as "of Exmouth" here makes him sound like an event unto himself.
 * Reworded.

GA progress

 * Hi, thanks for reviewing this! I've responded above, with one unactioned point that I've queried. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 16:47, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Responded above...oops! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 01:25, 30 December 2023 (UTC)