Talk:HMS Express (H61)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 13:41, 26 July 2016 (UTC)

I'll take this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 13:41, 26 July 2016 (UTC)


 * One dupe link
 * I don't see a link for Esk
 * Might clarify that I-58 was also a submarine
 * What role did she have at Normandy? The article jumps from preparing for the invasion to sailing for refit in July.
 * See if my few extra words are clear enough to better explain her duties.
 * How is the state of the ship's hull in 2010 cited to a book published in 2004? Parsecboy (talk) 15:03, 26 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Umm, time travel? Might be a bit of personal knowledge by a previous editor. I've certainly never been there to have a gander. Many thanks for catching these infelicities. I'll try to return the favo(u)rs once I'm back from vacation in a week or so.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:15, 28 July 2016 (UTC)