Talk:HMS Hermes (95)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:13, 15 August 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * The beam of 73 feet 3 inches (22.3 m), in the text differs from the inf box 70 feet 3 inches (21.4 m)
 * Fixed.
 * The ships speed in the text is 26.178 knots (48.482 km/h; 30.125 mph) and in the inf box 25 knots (46 km/h; 29 mph)
 * Read it again. Design speed was 25 knots and speed on trials was 26.178 knots.
 * In the service history section - two single 40-millimetre (1.6 in) 2-pounder "pom-pom" AA guns prior to this measurements are imperial first and metric in brackets for consistency can this be changed.
 * Done.
 * In the Second World War section Hermes rammed the armed merchant cruiser HMS Corfu. Makes it sound like a deliberate act consider changing to collided with or similar.
 * Fixed.
 * Some minor points well done again. Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:48, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:39, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Passed Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:35, 16 August 2011 (UTC)