Talk:HMS Hyperion (H97)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 02:48, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:48, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "During the Spanish Civil War of 1936–1939 the ship spent enforced the arms blockade" no idea what the 'spent' is meant to mean there; presume it should be removed.
 * "both sides of the conflictas part" as part
 * "She remained with Ark Royal's" you mean just Ark Royal?
 * The infobox has her laid down on march 26, while the text says march 27; which is it?
 * All fixed, thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:55, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:04, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything checks out now, so the article passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 18:21, 22 March 2011 (UTC)