Talk:HMS Irresistible (1898)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:00, 5 November 2018 (UTC)

Might as well grab this one as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:00, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 19:23, 5 November 2018 (UTC)


 * No DABs, External links OK
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * Link mined in the infobox
 * Explain or link caliber in the lead.
 * Linked
 * she was transferred to the Dardanelles Campaign Rephrase as it's literally impossible
 * Done
 * Link commissioned, coastal artillery, mine, guard ship
 * All done
 * With attempts to tow her having failed, she was abandoned with most of her crew having been successfully evacuated, and eventually sank. Awkward, possibly split?
 * See how I reworded it
 * earlier class, the same high speed needs an "and" or something
 * Added
 * Change enlisted men to the British equivalent, "ratings"
 * Good catch
 * provide metric conversions in diameter for the various pounder guns
 * Done
 * main battery turrets sides surplus "s" in turrets?
 * Fixed
 * side-plate damage Do you mean hull?
 * Sure
 * Malta on 5 October 1905. She underwent a refit at Malta after her grounding, and a second refit there Suggest swapping the "there" at the sentence with the second Malta to avoid close conjunction syndrome
 * Works for me
 * Irresistible transferred to the Channel Fleet was transferred
 * Done
 * counter fire from Irresistible forced the Ottomans to check their fire, knocking out two guns in the process Awkward
 * Reworded slightly
 * Fix the conversion for 8 inch guns
 * Done
 * began to fail suggest malfunction--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:30, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 21:36, 27 November 2018 (UTC)