Talk:HMS Keith

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A couple of suggestions
Looks pretty good for B class, IMO. I have a couple of comments/suggestions. Firstly, the lead mentions that the ship was involved in enforcing a blockade during the Spanish Civil War, but this isn't really covered in the body. It probably should be (probably only needs a clause added to what is alrady there). Also, there are two sources in the References (Lenton and March), which don't appear to be specifically cited. Anyway, good work. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 10:09, 23 November 2011 (UTC)