Talk:HMS Lyra (1910)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 22:16, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

I will review this one, comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 22:16, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Lead
 * although sustaining damage: "although sustained damage"
 * Well spotted. I have amended the sentence to make it clear.

Design and description
 * After the coal-burning Beagle class,...: be explicit that the Beagle class precedes the Acorn class (as stated in the lead).
 * Clarified.


 * Unlike previous designs,...: presumably destroyer designs?
 * Made explicit.


 * which gave a range was 1,540: "which gave a range of 1,540"
 * Corrected.


 * Two single QF 12-pounder (3 in (76 mm)) guns: suggest amending the pipelink so that only the 76mm is bracketed, i.e. consistent with how it is presented in the infobox. Ditto for the 3-pounder that is later mentioned but reverse the order of the measurements so that inches is first (for consistency in presentation with the other armaments mentioned).
 * Good spot. That is now amended.


 * Suggest amending the characteristics section of the infobox to mention that they are "as built".
 * Added

Construction and career
 * The laid down/launch dates recited in the first para are inconsistent with the infobox.
 * Yes, that is strange. I have corrected them.


 * the amount of staff needed: suggest replacing staff with personnel. Staff comes across as a term you would use for a business.
 * Changed.

Other stuff
 * Use title case for the Colledge & Warlow ref
 * Done.


 * Newbolt is listed as a source but unless I missed it, is not actually cited.
 * I have added the relevant section in the body.


 * Dupe links: depth charges, Second Destroyer Flotilla
 * Removed.


 * Image tags check out
 * Thank you.

That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 09:47, 10 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your excellent review. I believe I have made the changes needed. Please tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 18:06, 10 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Passing this as GA as I believe that the article meets the necessary criteria. Zawed (talk) 09:33, 12 July 2022 (UTC)