Talk:HMS Menace (1915)/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 21:30, 25 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Image appropriately licensed
 * Link launched in the lede
 * Added link.
 * but recorded no hits Suggest changing this to "made a series of unsuccessful attacks" earlier in the sentence
 * Moved.
 * It transpired that the German warships did not exist. Awkward. Suggest integrating this into the sentence about why the extra speed was desired
 * Amended.
 * What are the boilers feeding to the turbines?
 * Clarified.
 * Add the sale date to the infobox
 * Added.
 * comma after Strongbow--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Clarified.

Thank you for this review. I believe the changes are made. simongraham (talk) 08:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)