Talk:HMS Minion (1915)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 11:08, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

I'll look this over soon. Harrias (he/him) • talk 11:08, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Images

 * 6a. Symbol confirmed.svg Appropriate PD tag on the only image used.
 * 6b. Symbol confirmed.svg Image used is relevant and suitably captioned. Consider adding alt text to the image, but it isn't a GA requirement.

Prose

 * 1a. Symbol confirmed.svg Not much wrong, just a couple of things to look at:
 * Consider linking "First War Programme" to War Emergency Programme destroyers.
 * Added. simongraham (talk) 21:41, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
 * "The M class was an improved version of the earlier L-class.." – Remove the hyphen from "L-class" I think?
 * Removed. simongraham (talk) 21:41, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Link High Seas Fleet.
 * 1b. Symbol confirmed.svg Similar, just minor issues.
 * Per WP:REDHAT, remove the "For other ships.." note.
 * Removed. simongraham (talk) 21:41, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
 * "..returned to Scapa Flow on 2 June. The destroyer remained part of the Eleventh Destroyer Flotilla on 19 August, based at Scapa Flow." Link Scapa Flow on the first, not second use.
 * Moved. simongraham (talk) 21:41, 13 December 2023 (UTC)


 * 3a. Symbol confirmed.svg A quick Google doesn't reveal any obvious gaps.
 * 3b. Symbol confirmed.svg Does not go into excessive detail.
 * 4. Symbol confirmed.svg Neutral.
 * 5. Symbol confirmed.svg Stable.

Response
Thank you for this very helpful review. I think the changes you have kindly pointed out have been made. Please tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 21:41, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Changes look good, passing. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 11:09, 20 December 2023 (UTC)