Talk:HMS Moresby/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:29, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "previous L-class destroyer, capable" destroyer overlinked.
 * Done.


 * "First War Construction Programme" this sounds notable, should we redlink it for an article?
 * None of the programmes have articles yet. This could be a nice task for someone.


 * "The destroyer was..." last destroyer you mentioned was the rumoured German one.
 * Thank you. I have clarified this.


 * "displacement was" capital D.
 * Good spot.


 * Link long tons, unusual unit.
 * Done.


 * "shaft horsepower" link.
 * Done.


 * "296 long tons" avoid starting sentence with numeral.
 * Reworded.


 * "torpedoes.[5]The ship" space.
 * Done.


 * Could link complement to Ship's company.
 * Wikilinked.


 * "changed to Moresby.[8] The new name honoured" -> "changed to Moresby to honour"
 * Done.

Done. Done.
 * "the Grand Fleet, joining" overlinked.
 * "in what would be the" in the.
 * "protect the battlecruisers of the Fleet" -> "of the Grand Fleet"
 * Done.


 * "the reconnaissance seaplane had been recovered" I missed this happening...
 * Sentence added.


 * "rejoined the Flotilla and" flotilla unless you use the full formal title.
 * Fixed.


 * "German High Seas Fleet. The two" overlinked.
 * Removed.


 * "after 1710 on " make it clear it's the time, i.e. 17:10 or 1710 hours or whatever MOS:TIME suggests.
 * Done.


 * "and at 2:15 turned" same. Is that 02:15, 2:15pm??
 * Done


 * "to Buncrana with" where??
 * Clarified.


 * Could convoy escort be linked to Escort Group?
 * I do not think it was not so formal then.


 * Wouldn't U-boat be a better link than submarine?
 * Changed.


 * Pennant number table, no reason to capitalise Number, and row/col scopes would be much appreciated for accessibility.
 * Fixed.


 * Ref 11, 12, should just be p.
 * Fixed.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:43, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I have amended the article. Please tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 23:01, 3 September 2021 (UTC)