Talk:HMS Myngs (1914)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 05:08, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

I will take this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 05:08, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Zawed. I look forward to your comments. simongraham (talk) 12:53, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

Lead
 * The M class were an improvement on the preceding L class...: suggest either "The M class ships were an improvement on those of the preceding L class..."
 * Added.
 * Should the hyphen be present on all instances of "M class" & "L class"?
 * I have tried to follow Template:Sclass in using the hyphen for the adjectival form and without for the noun.

Design and development
 * ...the greater performance was appreciated...: suggest, for greater specificity, "the greater performance of the M-class was appreciated".
 * Changed.
 * a length of 265 ft (80.8 m): the conversion in "m" doesn't match what is in the infobox
 * Fixed the infobox so it is consistent.
 * Referring to speed, those in the infobox go to the first decimal point.
 * Similarly fixed.
 * Mystic had a main armament ...: Mystic?
 * Oops. I updated the sentence from the GA review of the other destroyer but forgot to change the name. Fixed.

Construction and career
 * By the following month, the routine developed...: suggest "a routine"
 * Changed.
 * ...unsuccessful search for the German minelaying...: suggest "a German"
 * Changed.

Other stuff
 * Sources look reliable, no spotchecks done as nominator has excellent history
 * Monograph 33 is listed as a source but doesn't seem to be cited
 * Good spot. I have added the relevant sentence.
 * No dupe links
 * Image tags OK.

Looks in fine shape, only minor issues found. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:08, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for another very helpful review. I believe I have made all the changes. Please tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 13:42, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Your changes look fine, so am passing as GA now as I believe the article meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 01:59, 12 February 2023 (UTC)