Talk:HMS Pallas (1816)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:37, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

I will review this one in due course. Zawed (talk) 08:37, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Lead
 * frigate spent time blockading the Azores being making trips to India: something off here, perhaps "being" should be "before"?
 * Oops, was meant to be "before making..."

Design
 * cites 1 and 2 are in reverse order (if that's a thing for you). Same issue with first paragraph of design section
 * Fixed


 * the cite at the end of the second to last sentence of the second paragraph is redundant since it is the same as the last cite of the paragraph
 * Good catch, this used to be a separate paragraph

Construction
 * I see there is two different dates for the reorder, but you've gone with Winfield for the infobox? I assume there is no such inconsistency with the date of being laid down?
 * I've gone with Winfield as the more modern source. The re-order is the only controversial date.


 * Complimenting should be Complementing
 * Changed

Service
 * Looks all good to me

Other stuff
 * Happy to AGF on sources given history of nominator
 * Put the 1999 Gardiner ref ahead of the 2000 one
 * Image tags all OK
 * No dupe links

That's all I have for now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:24, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for going through this! I've replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:46, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks all good here, I am passing as GA because I believe the article meets the necessary criteria. Zawed (talk) 08:06, 13 November 2023 (UTC)