Talk:HMS Pomone (1897)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crowz  RSA  23:00, 26 December 2010 (UTC)


 * These "Third class" cruisers were designed I'm not sure, but shouldn't "Third" be in lowercase?
 * Indeed. Fixed.
 * There is inconsistency between spelling out single digit numbers and using numerals for single digit numbers.
 * The conversion template doesn't allow for numbers to be spelled out. Plus I'm using numerals for all hyphenated measurements like 4-inch.
 * The lead should be expanded.
 * Again, not much to work with here. What else do you think can be added?

That's all I see. I'm putting the article on hold for a week. Crowz RSA  01:41, 2 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:58, 2 January 2011 (UTC)