Talk:HMS Ramillies (1892)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 10:15, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With the comment/s below addressed, the article now satisfies the criteria for grammar, as well as layout and list incorporation. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:55, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
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: The article uses a number of reputable sources, and does not appear to contain any original research. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:57, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
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: The article seems to cover all encyclopedic aspects of its topic for which reliable information could be found. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:55, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
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. The article maintains an unbiased approach to its subject. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:54, 7 May 2016 (UTC) . The most recent revisions indicate the article had not been subjected to any edit warring for at least six years. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:44, 29 April 2016 (UTC) : Both images used in the article are relevant to the topic, and both are public domain, so there is no fair use-related concern. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:43, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
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Hi, thanks for taking this on. Any updates on the review? Cheers, —Noswall59 (talk) 13:02, 28 April 2016 (UTC).
 * Yes, of course. I'll get to this one in a couple of hours. :) Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 00:01, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Comments
The article could basically be passed at this point, but first I want to check one thing: What exactly is meant by this line from the top paragraph of Service history: "She had been constructed at such a slight tilt that it took nearly an hour and a half to travel down the slips and into the water..." It's not exactly clear to me, as worded. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:59, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Okay, yes, that passage was not the clearest. Hopefully it makes more sense now. Many thanks, —Noswall59 (talk) 18:49, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks; that's much better! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:54, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

The article is passed. Congratulations! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:55, 7 May 2016 (UTC)