Talk:HMS Saladin (1919)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 16:06, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 16:06, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

Prelim

 * V and W-class destroyer is a duplicated link
 * Removed.
 * Image correctly licensed
 * Article is stable
 * Earwig reports copyvio unlikely

Lede and infobox

 * "he S class was"
 * Fixed.
 * Very nit-picky, but the article says the ship was "handed over" which doesn't necessarily mean sold
 * Amended.

Design and development

 * "Mark V 21-inch torpedo to be carried aft"
 * The source does not say. The implication is that they were carried in the torpedo tubes aft and that is carried over here.

Construction and career

 * Choose whether you capitalise "Armistice" or not, currently you use both
 * Capitalised as per MOS:MILTERMS
 * "independent operator under HMS Victory" what does this mean, considering Victory doesn't really...go anywhere?
 * The elderly ship of the line had been refloated by then and much the restoration carried out but was by no means operational. I have added some text to clarify that.
 * "would be sent to join"
 * Amended.
 * What role did Saladin have in the sinking of U-207?
 * I read the sources to say that the destroyer was one of the escorts that between them sank the submarine but the crew's actual contribution was probably small.
 * Believe it should be "ON 18", etc, rather than "ON. 18" "ON.25", "HX. 154"
 * Amended and linked.
 * Perhaps a few more words on where these convoys are going, because it isn't made clear
 * Clarified.
 * Link Falmouth
 * Added.