Talk:HMS Savage (G20)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:57, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "town of Burton on Trent" Burton-on-Trent or Burton upon Trent.
 * Done.


 * Is there a link for "adopted"?
 * Unfortunately not.


 * "new 4.5 inches" should be
 * Done.


 * " the QF Mk III forward and two single QF Mk IV " these two link to the same article.
 * Duplicate removed.


 * "Operations Camera and Operation Governor" links?
 * Unfortunately not. I have replaced this with a bit more context.


 * "from Gibraltar to Scapa Flow" links?
 * Done.


 * "the Battle of North Cape" _the_ North Cape.
 * Done.


 * "purchased in the Flotilla and" not the full formal name so just "flotilla" suffices.
 * Done.


 * "615 tons of oil" avoid starting sentences with nuermals.
 * Reworded.


 * "new 4.5 inches (114 mm" see above.
 * Done.


 * "twin QF Mk III mounted forward and two single QF Mk IV mounted" likewise.
 * Done.


 * "Hazemeyer mounts" what are they? Link?
 * Added link.


 * "Newcastle upon Tyne on " comma after Tyne.
 * Done.


 * "town of Burton on Trent" see above.
 * Done.


 * Operation Camera/Governor links?
 * Unfortunately not.


 * Link Gibraltar and Scarpa Flow.
 * Done.


 * Wartime service table could use a caption and row/col scopes per MOS:DTT for screen readers etc.
 * Done.


 * "Battle of North Cape" section and links, its "Battle of the North Cape".
 * Done.


 * "December the Admiralty signalled" overlinked.
 * Removed.


 * "cruisers HMS Belfast and" linked to a redirect.
 * Fixed.


 * "radar directed" hyphenate.
 * Done.


 * "star shells" what are they?
 * Added wikilink.


 * Link Portsmouth/Chatham, I imagine you are referring to the docks there, rather than the towns.
 * Yes. Added wikilinks


 * "Tirpitz, 1942-1944" en-dash.
 * Done.


 * "Disarmament, 1942-1947" en-dash.
 * Done.

That's all for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:20, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for a comprehensive review. I have made amendments. Please take another look. simongraham (talk) 20:30, 3 September 2021 (UTC)