Talk:HMS Sea Rover/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:22, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * "sinking one transport, one gunboat, one merchant, three sailing vessels" - Consider linking
 * Linked merchant. Transport, gunboat, and sailing vessel are too broad.
 * "Sea Rover collided with an Australian corvette" - Link corvette. At least in the US, the corvette car is better known that the corvette ship
 * Done.
 * "It is uncertain if Sea Rover was completed with a 20-millimetre (0.8 in) Oerlikon light AA gun or had one added later." - The prose suggests ambiguity on this point, but the infobox states that it was added later. If there's ambiguity, it should be reflected evenly everywhere.
 * Done.
 * "The third-batch S-class boats were fitted with either a Type 129AR or 138 ASDIC system and a Type 291 or 291W early-warning radar" - Infobox suggests ambiguity for the ASDIC system, but only gives one type for the early-warning; if there's ambiguity in the sources, then that should also be reflected in the infobox.
 * From what I get, the 291W was the submarine-specific version. Changed to only Type 192W radar
 * Link Casablanca
 * Done
 * "On 21 February 1944, the boat went on patrol in the Strait of Malacca; On 3 March she sighted a Japanese submarine, possibly the Ro-100-class submarine RO-111 and fired a full spread of six torpedoes; The submarine was seen to alter its course, possibly to evade the torpedoes, and no hits were seen" - Twice in here you have a semicolon followed by a capital letter, it should either be a period instead of the semicolon, or it should be lowercase
 * Done - I have a bad habit of putting capitals after semicolons.
 * "she laid a minefield of 8 mines off the Malay Peninsula" - MOS:NUMERALS
 * Done.
 * "Sea Rover was depth charged by two Japanese anti-submarine ships South of Penang" - I don't think South should be capitalized here.
 * Done.
 * "No allied aircraft were seen" - Capitalize Allied
 * Done.

2.
 * Move Colledge to a Further reading section, since it isn't used as a source.
 * Actually, I've removed it.

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6.
 * The source link for the badge isn't functional. I'm not the best with fair-use rationales, but I think a working source link is needed.
 * Found a version on Pinterest, artistic works by the UK gov before 1970 are PD.

7.

Good work. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 19:16, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the quick review. L293D (☎ • ✎) 02:35, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 02:58, 29 May 2020 (UTC)