Talk:HMS Vigilant (1777)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 12:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC)

Hi,


 * Will do in the next day or two. Regards, MathewTownsend (talk) 12:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC)


 * review
 * Really very good, with everything in place. Well written. Just a few nitpicks:


 * "and she had a beam of 36 ft (11.0 m)" why not "with a bean of 36 ft ..." - "had" makes it sound her bean length changed, whereas the article doesn't clarify if measurement errors accounted for the difference.


 * "She was then survey" > surveyed?


 * "sometime during the year" > that year?


 * That's all for now. Well done!

MathewTownsend (talk) 20:50, 24 June 2012 (UTC)

Good suggestions, all done. Thanks for the review.

GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:
 * B. Complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Provides references to all sources:
 * B. Provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Main aspects are addressed:
 * B. Remains focused:
 * 1) Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 21:50, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 21:50, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 21:50, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 21:50, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 21:50, 25 June 2012 (UTC)