Talk:HSwMS Clas Fleming/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Z1720 (talk · contribs) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing article. Comments will be given below. Z1720 (talk) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Prose:
 * "before she was began a reconstruction that installed" This sentence needs to be reworked.
 * "the first ship to be so equipped." First ship in the world, or in Sweden's navy? Clarify in the article
 * " enemy coast under cover of darkness" -> enemy coast at night while the enemy's visibility would be low.
 * Split the first sentence of "Background and description" to avoid a run-on
 * "the beginning of World War 2 in 1939" The beginning of the article used "World War II". This should be consistent.
 * I conducted some copy-editing while I read, feel free to revert if they are not helpful.

Source review:
 * No concerns with the sources.
 * No earwig concerns
 * References are offline or in another language, so accepting as AGF

Image review:
 * File:HMS Clas Fleming.jpg, File:Clas Fleming with two funnels.jpg, and File:Clas Fleming during WW2.jpg need US-pd tags.
 * Per MOS:ALT suggest adding alt text

Those are my thoughts. Ping me when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 18:17, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review; see if my changes are acceptable.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:27, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

All concerns have been resolved, so this is a pass. Congratulations. Z1720 (talk) 15:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)