Talk:HSwMS John Ericsson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 06:56, 11 October 2010 (UTC)


 * Apart from the usual copyediting, I re-arranged that sentence about the personal union between Sweden and Norway, just like in the other article.
 * You switch between the designation of "monitor" and "ironclad". From the article on French ironclads, it seems to me that there began to be a distinguishing difference.  Ironclads seemed to become nearer to the modern idea of the battleship, while monitors were less modern.  Is this correct?
 * Everything checks out, as usual.

JonCatalán(Talk) 07:02, 11 October 2010 (UTC)