Talk:HSwMS Niord

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Thank you for your comments, which have definitely improved the article. I have nominated it for GA. simongraham (talk) 15:16, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Use of the Roslagen Air Corps designation is anachronistic
 * Clarified.
 * Suggest changing max in the infobox to deep load in parentheses
 * I am not sure it is analogous in the source. The range of terms used for displacement and draft seem excessive to me.
 * link Motala
 * Good spot. Done.
 * you already gave the Swedish term for coast defense ships in the lede
 * True. I feel everything in the lead should also be in the body.
 * I agree, although to a lesser degree. I don't sweat foreign terms unless they're reused very deep into the article.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * 3 digit precision for speeds is excessively precise
 * I was surprised too. The source is very impressive in its accuracy.
 * Good, just remember summary style.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * link elevation, training, bridge, centreline, stability
 * Done apart from training, which is a disambiguation page. Training (gunnery) redirects to Gun turret so I have wikilinked turrets instead. Centreline redirects to a definition - are you thinking of making this an article?
 * Try Gun laying instead. No, centreline isn't worth an article, but I think that the definition is useful--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Added. simongraham (talk) 18:37, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
 * More later--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:25, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Wide really doesn't work for armor belts. Try deep or tall
 * Done.
 * Fleks has a Swedish title, but is in Polish?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:42, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
 * The text is.
 * Curious.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Check out this for foreign voyages: --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:06, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Unfortunately, it seems to only list one trip to Danzig, which I cannot find in any contemporary source and does not greatly add to the story. I will use this for others though.
 * Absolutely. It's gonna be a gold mine for Fylgia, though and helps a little bit for a couple of the destroyers.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:52, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Good, but having done this; I'll have to let someone else review it :-(. I haven't really looked at her sister yet; can I assume that the description section is much the same as this? So all I'd need to look at would be the career section?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 9 March 2024 (UTC)


 * I just noticed the 46 cm torpedoes. Friedman's WWI naval weapons book only lists 35, 38 and 45 cm torpedoes in service. I've never heard of any torpedoes of that size so I'd be willing to be a large amount of money that it's a typo.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:57, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Good spot. Amended. simongraham (talk) 18:37, 12 March 2024 (UTC)