Talk:Habibi (poet)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 02:14, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:14, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

Source are reliable as far as I can determine. I've copyedited a bit, rather than list minor emendations. The above are the only issues. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:26, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
 * What's the date of the artwork depicted in the infobox? It looks modern, so I'm doubtful that it can be out of copyright.
 * "(hilaf-i üslub-i şu'ara-yi zemanedür)": this is a translation of the previous phrase? Suggest putting it in a footnote if so.
 * "This can be inferred from the fact that Fuzuli wrote a mukhammas deduced from the matla of one of Habibi's own ghazals": it's OK to have the occasional unusual word linked rather than explained, but this is incomprehensible to a reader unfamiliar with the field. Can we give some parenthetical explanations?


 * Thank you for the review!
 * 1) I don't know what the date for the artwork is, but it shouldn't be older than 40-50 years old, I'm not sure if it's even copyrighted as it's more like a poster standing outside on Nizami Museum's walls.
 * 2) I'm not sure what that is as it was added by another user. I've deleted it as it seems to be out of place.
 * 3) Done!
 * Let me know if there are any other issues. — Golden  call me maybe? 14:23, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
 * I've struck two of the points. I would expect the artwork to be copyrighted, so I think the choices are to either upload it locally to en-wiki and add a fair use rationale, crediting the copyright to an unknown author, or to delete it from the article.  To be honest I don't think a fair use rationale would work -- the reader doesn't gain any significant understanding from the image -- so I would recommend deleting it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 14:28, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Deleted. — Golden  call me maybe? 14:30, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:34, 1 September 2022 (UTC)