Talk:Hal Peck/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 10:02, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this one shortly. Harrias talk 10:02, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

Image

 * Image is appropriately licensed.
 * Alt text would be nice, but is not a GA requirement.

Prose

 * What does "everyday player" mean?
 * What is a "fly ball"?
 * "with the catch being" Avoid noun plus -ing.
 * "noted as "one of the greatest catches even seen in Columbus." By who? Provide inline attribution.
 * "shooting his foor" Typo.
 * Either explain, or provide a link, so the reader knows what a "6–2 record" is.
 * "though he did not record an at bat." What does this mean?

That's it from me. Harrias talk 08:43, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 * I'll start working on it. For the open access template, what should I use in place of that? The deprecation is news to me, no idea something changed on that front. Wizardman  15:50, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Nothing; it is just assumed that links are free to access unless otherwise noted: only non-free sources need marking. Harrias  talk 16:12, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Issues now fixed. I wasn't sure how to reword the everyday player since i was using the literal definition, so i just moved the games played up from further down since it gets the point across. Wizardman  23:07, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Yeah, that makes more sense now. Nice work on this, I'm happy that it meets the GA criteria now. Harrias  talk 08:54, 13 July 2020 (UTC)