Talk:Haldia Port/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 18:37, 30 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 10:09, 19 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments
Despite your efforts of clean-up, similar issues still remain. Examples below: 1. Only Liquefied is capitalized in the acronym LPG 2. Citations in the middle of sentence #83, #91, #92 etc. 3. Re-linking of the same articles, Kolkata port in the lead itself multiple times
 * General issues

Generic issues: a. Lead should consist of a summary of what is detailed in the article. In the lead section, there are content which are not part of the article and hence not sourced. (E.g. cargo handling, hinterland etc.) b. Lead does not appropriately summarize the article. It needs expansion with essential points taken from major topics. 1. First few lines is itself confusing. Is the port at the confluence of the two rivers or on the west bank of Hooghly river? 2. Lot of information cramped with no clarity. 125 kms from which deep sea? What pilotage station? 3. It was developed in the 1960s.. 4. what is DWT? 5. Split the line. What does "40-50-percent cargo parcels." mean? 6.  a. Do not use or terms (either mention one of Haldia port or HDC). b. In the article, use the name Kolkata Port or SPM uniformly across, do not use interchangeable names, it is confusing. c. It is already mentioned that HDC is an associate port of SPM. it is a repetition 7. A long list, literally all of Central/North/North East is landlocked + countries of N/B. With many ports across the coast in WB/Odisha + Bangladesh, it does not seem to be due. The statement can be worded simply as "HP is one of the ports that support the hinterland of Central, East and NE India" 8. a. Same repetition of states in the next sentence b. It shoud simply be "The port handled x cargo in 2023-24 and..." c. Again confusing last line, is the kolkata port complex fifth largest in the country? As per official data, SMP was the ninth busiest port. If Haldi is reported as a separate port, this does not warrant a mention.
 * Lead

1. eight (Spell out in words for nos.<10), port is located at x, eight ... 2. Again a different term for the same Kolkata port 3. Same issues as mentioned in the lead on the location 4. Confusing wordings. Lower Gangetic Plain in Gangetic Plain? flat plain where land is flat? 5. Every place has seasonal variations, what type of climate would be better 6. The region received less rainfall (x) from the NE monsoon during ... 7. dock was.. 8. Repetition of silt from the first sentence 9. Re-linking of SW. This should rather follow monsoon in the first para. 10. Region experiences early morning fog during ...
 * Location and meteorology

1. First para quotes no source 2. Haldia was never mentioned before this. Then how will another place become a contender? Either it should talk about two potential options or Haldia should be introduced first 3. What is DWT? 4. Chief miinster of WB 5. GOvernment of WB, Haldia etc. linked multiple times 6. Either skip the phrase or explain the problem 7. What is DG 8.  along with Dutch.. 9. Full name of Larras? renowned how? 10. there is no logical continuity. It again talks of events from the previous para 11. Should come later 12. what Dutch company? 13. Daily rent for who? Then what was the earlier 2.3 cr contract for? it is a fixed contract or daily rent? and so on..
 * History


 * Hi
 * Thanks for pointing out the issues through comments. I started working on the issues again.


 * I think you are confused about the location of the Port of Kolkata. Location of the Port of Kolkata is given below:


 * The official name of the Port of Kolkata is "Syama Prasad Mookerjee Port, Kolkata". This port consists of port facilities located in two different locations. The port facility located in Kolkata and its surrounding area is officially known as the Kolkata Dock System, while the port facility located in the Haldia area is officially known as the Haldia Dock Complex. That is, Port of Kolkata includes the port facilities of Kolkata and Haldia. খাঁ শুভেন্দু (talk) 06:50, 24 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi! I can very well understand that Haldia is as a sub port of the system, which is evident from the mention in the lead. Thanks for your clarification as well. The inconsistencies remain w.r.t. to the name or mention of the same. Thanks! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 07:27, 24 May 2024 (UTC)