Talk:Hallaton Helmet/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 19:55, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

Hey Prioryman, assuming you don't mind getting another review from me so soon, I'll be glad to take this one. (If you'd rather have a variety of eyes on your work, on the other hand, it wouldn't hurt my feelings at all to hand this off to someone else.) Comments to follow before the end of the day, hopefully. Thanks as always for your hard work! -- Khazar2 (talk) 19:55, 9 March 2013 (UTC)


 * That's fine, thanks for your help! Prioryman (talk) 20:49, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

Initial comments
This looks solid and ripe for promotion to me. I only have one initial concern, noted below, though I've also done some tweaking as I went--please double-check my edits and feel free to revert if you disagree. Also, I went ahead and archived the web sources for the article since it relies heavily on them--hope you don't mind.


 * "of immense importance regarding the understanding of Iron Age Britain" -- "of immense importance" is a bit subjective. Is it possible to attribute this opinion in the text? Otherwise, I'd suggest just sticking to more concrete statements of what was found there. -- Khazar2 (talk) 23:13, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Actually, that statement was left over from an old version of the article before I got my hands on it. I've rewritten it now to be a straight description of the site. Prioryman (talk) 20:48, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Great, thanks. -- Khazar2 (talk) 13:30, 14 March 2013 (UTC)