Talk:Halloween (The Office)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 14:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Image: Add File:TheOffice(US)2-05.jpg image to the infobox
 * Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox
 * Lede: Link second season
 * Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
 * Lede: Show runner → Showrunner
 * Lede: Unlink United States
 * Lede: The episode first aired in the United States on October 18, 2005 on NBC. → The episode first aired on NBC in the United States on October 18, 2005
 * Lede: Remove the "guest stars" from the lede. It should be in "production"
 * I added it to production, but kept it in lede, for the sake of continuity with other Office pages.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Add how many viewers on original broadcast and 18-49 rating to lede. It must summarize contents.
 * Plot: we see Michael alone at home in front of the television → Michael is alone at home in front of the television
 * Production: his second → his second credit
 * Production: It goes to details that have nothing to do with the episode on the "production" directing part of the section. For example, he created this, wrote for this. There is a separate article for that.
 * Production: Show runner → Showrunner
 * Production: "This episode is the only episode to date to have a quote to play over the Deedle-Dee Productions title card in the closing credits". Reference is needed. Honestly, I don't know if it needs to be even needs to be there.
 * Production: Deedle-Dee Productions also produces King of the Hill — Nobody cares. Don't mean to be to mean here.
 * Production: References for this: During the pre-production for the episode, the cast and crew realized that the Halloween conceit would allow the various cast members to wear costumes, rather than their "usual, realistically plain suits
 * Production: Add "guest stars"
 * Production: Add the television rating on television in the United States
 * I can't find information on this...--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I have added. -- TBrandley 00:37, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: copy-edit — "Halloween." → "Halloween"
 * Cultural references: "Due to the presence of Halloween, many of the employees costumes reflect movie and literary characters. Kelly is dressed as Dorothy Gale, but Michael makes an insensitive remark about Bend It Like Beckham. Dwight is dressed as a Sith, one of the characters in the Star Wars universe capable of using the "dark side" of the Force". — All needs references
 * They all use the TV Guide and Television Without Pity source. I didn't re-add it, because you don't have to double up on the same citation at the end of every sentence, if it's understood that they use the same one--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "Halloween" originally aired on NBC in the United States on October 18, 2005 → "Halloween" was originally broadcast on NBC in the United States on October 18, 2005
 * Reception: The episode was viewed by 8 million viewers and received a 4.1 rating/10% share among adults between the ages of 18 and 49. This means that it was seen by 4.1% of all 18- to 49-year-olds, and 10% of all 18- to 49-year-olds watching television at the time of the broadcast. The episode was the number one ranked episode among adults, men, and women in the 18–34 demographic, and achieved its highest 18–49 rating since the season's premiere. — References all definelty needed, most likely to ABC Medianet
 * Again, this uses the following Press Release source, as per above... NOTE: I went ahead and did it, since it's numbers.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "Halloween" retained 73 percent of its lead-in "My Name is Earl" audience → "Halloween" retained 73 percent of its lead-in My Name Is Earl audience
 * Reception: An encore presentation of the episode, on June 6, 2006, received 2.2 rating/7% share and was viewed by over 4.8 million viewers - Unneeded, don't need to a rerun ratings for the US
 * Reception: Add UK airing, with References
 * I can't find this anywhere...--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Reviews: Need of expanding
 * That's all I can find, but it's been fine with the other Season 2 GAs that have passed--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Reviews: Add more reviews.
 * Umm... see above.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Reviews: Was it well received by television critics, mixed, or negative
 * Reviews: Cleanup needed
 * Where exactly?--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Yahoo → Yahoo! TV
 * References: Ref. 4 — publisher to work for TV Guide
 * References: Ref. 6 — work to publisher for Fox Broadcasting Company
 * References: Ref. 13 — published on October 18, 2008, according to the reference
 * External links: Link NBC.com to NBC
 * External links: Add The Office Wiki link

On hold. See big boo-boos in article. TBrandley 23:52, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I got most of the issues taken care of. I explained the rationale of some of my actions too.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I am ready to promote now. TBrandley 00:42, 19 June 2012 (UTC)