Talk:Halt's Peril

Plot
I've reworked the plot to tell the story but cause i'm a beginner in editing i'm sure there are lots of errors and it probably violates a whole bunch of Wiki guidelines. so please can someone with the book improve it? i'll do the same with The Emperor of Nihon-Ja soon and will appreciate the help Tca achintya (talk) 16:29, 29 November 2010 (UTC)