Talk:Halt im Gedächtnis Jesum Christ, BWV 67/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

I'm going to take up all four cantatas you have listed at GAN, not sure why they are having to wait so long. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Jakob Ebert" hymn Did you mean "Ebert's" or something else?
 * Wikilink movement, chorale (at first mention) and may be a few other terms readers may be unfamiliar with
 * yes --GA


 * History and words
 * in general whose heart is not at peace I think a comma after "general" would make it clearer.
 * yes --GA


 * A link for movement?
 * if you think so --GA


 * Jesus appears as to his disciples What is "as to his" here?
 * trying "as he did to his disciples" --GA


 * Music
 * structured in symmetry in seven sections Saying "symmetrically" would avoid the "in...in..." structure.
 * yes --GA


 * is accompanied by an obbligato...by an upward run. Don't leave this unsourced.
 * run sourced, while the oboe is taken from the table higher up, which is sourced to Bischof --GA


 * I could not get "woodwinds" at first, perhaps add a link? Unless I know too little of this field...
 * if you think so --GA


 * Selected recordings
 * The sortable table Add "following" or "below"
 * added "below", removed "sortable" because some users can't sort --GA

That is all from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:10, 11 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much for reading four of them! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:13, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Happy to promote. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 15:52, 13 June 2016 (UTC)