Talk:Hamilton Fish Park/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Short description goes at the top.
 * Add alt text to every image being used.
 * "restored again" "restored"
 * "facades made" "facades are made"
 * Remove the comma after "pool entrances".
 * "mayor Robert" "Mayor Robert"
 * "bee reopened" - typo?
 * "a NYC Parks" "an NYC Parks"
 * "wading pool; and" "wading pool, and"
 * "at a cost of" "for" (less wordy)
 * "New York City, it was" "New York City, was"
 * Wikilink Edith Evans Asbury and Amy Sohn.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 04:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)