Talk:Hamiltonian truncation

Some suggestions
Hello I have reorganized your draft, I hope this is a progress. A few suggestions for further improvement: Sylvain Ribault (talk) 20:28, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
 * The draft is written in pedagogical style ("Let us", "We"). A more encyclopedic style would be welcome, where sentences are statements of facts.
 * The geometric discussion at the beginning of 1.1 might be superfluous or out of place: it would be better to get more directly to the point. (Define first, explain later.)
 * It would be good to cite a source for the example in 1.3. Hopefully this is not OR?
 * After moving the draft to mainspace, do not forget to wikilink it from other existing articles when appropriate.


 * Thanks for your help, Sylvain! I agree and will try to implement your fixes. I realize that some older references are missing too. MatthHo (talk) 09:26, 10 May 2021 (UTC)