Talk:Hamish Peacock

Explanations
@User:NickGibson3900 - Sorry, I wasn't clear in my earlier comments. I think what is needed in the article is an explanation of what 'Qualification Group A', 'Qualification Group B', and 'PB' actually mean. Citations verifying these references (which would by the way only be validated by giving page numbers in a 272-page pdf) are not enough; readers who have no background knowledge will not know what these terms mean. See MOS:JARGON, WP:STYLE and WP:Page numbers. Best, --Smerus (talk) 15:00, 13 June 2014 (UTC)

Assessment
I opted for C class, although I see the article as somewhere between Start and C class. The prose in the Activities section is a bit choppy. Chronological ordering of events in this section would have helped in that respect. GregorB (talk) 08:34, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

Biography assessment rating comment
The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article.


 * 1) ✅ -- NickGibson3900 (talk) 11:53, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) ✅ -- NickGibson3900 (talk) 11:53, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
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 * 5) ✅ -- NickGibson3900 (talk) 12:20, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) ✅ -- NickGibson3900 (talk) 11:53, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
 * 7) ✅ -- NickGibson3900 (talk) 11:53, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
 * 8) Keep working on the article. Chances are that other editors will notice its existence and join you in working on it. If nobody seems to notice it and you'd like one or two to do so, mention the article in the talk page of a relevant "WikiProject" (e.g. Music), or this one, or both.
 * 9) ✅ -- NickGibson3900 (talk) 11:53, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
 * 10) ✅ -- NickGibson3900 (talk) 13:10, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
 * 11) Relax! and take a break if you reached this point. You deserve it!

Feedback
I am not familiar with athletics so not sure how much other event-related material can go in. It is a bit sparse on biographical info. The lead is also very slim. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:58, 5 July 2014 (UTC)
 * @Cas Liber What should I do to improve the lead? NickGibson3900 (Talk - Cont.) 09:08, 6 July 2014 (UTC)

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