Talk:Hanapepe massacre

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 January 2021 and 14 May 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Tmsloan.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:02, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
I really enjoyed reading the work you have done on this article! I think you did a great job of creating non biased, organized, and easy to follow content. I think the article could benefit from adding sources to the sections that rely heavily on one source, if possible. Also, images could really enhance the article! Overall, you did a great job, and I can’t wait to see what other information you add to this article. Kef1170 (talk) 18:09, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

Hi Tiffany, thank you for your contributions to this article! I agree with Kate's comments, this article is well-organized and easy to read. For improvements, I would try to build upon Filipinos in Hawaii, as well as the Legacy section. The info in Legacy is from 2020, so try to see if there is more current info on the situation. Other than that, good job & can't wait to see what you add! Mgregg21 (talk) 19:57, 30 March 2021 (UTC)