Talk:Handstand (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 18:09, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 18:09, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * 1) "It was written by the performers" - what performers mean? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 2) "A bouncy hip hop song, it interpolates Big Pun's 2000 single "It's So Hard"." - shouldn't it be "As bouncy hip hop song, it interpolates Big Pun's 2000 single "It's So Hard".? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Changed both. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

Composition and reception

 * 1) "which itself is based around a sample of Danny Rivera" - do you mean this Danny Rivera? It's not linked. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 2) I don't think there is the reason to capitalise "En Un Rincon Del Alma". Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Changed both. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) I would try to incorporate descriptions of what was said than direct quotes of reviews. Same for section "Music video". Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Sure, I'll try to tinker later today/tomorrow. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

Music video

 * 1) "placed themselves in a Thunderdome-like future" - if Bethy Squires mean film of that title, then it should be italicised. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Done. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * 1) Missing reference. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * It's not missing, per WP:PERSONNEL it's not needed to source credits sections, however I added a source. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) I would list credits by role than person. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I never do it this way, and I pretty much hate the way it looks. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

Other

 * 1) Would you upload and add audio sample to infobox? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I think there is no need to; if there was some kind of special quality about it pointed out by critics, then I would certainly add it, but I don't see it as necessary here. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) How is this a single if there is no digital or physical release? Releasing it in radio doesn't mean that's a single. It has no cover too? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 2) If there is no confirmation of single release then whole article need to be modifed. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 3) It was released to radio only in two countries? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * If a song gets added to radio airplay on national level, then automatically it is qualified as a single. "Handstand" was sent to rhythmic stations in the United States (as indicated by AllAccess) and to radio airplay in Italy (as indicated by EarOne). Both sources are reliable per WP:SINGLE?. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 14:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) I added Category:Song recordings produced by Hitmaka. Are there categories for the other producers too? If not is the enough songs produced by them to create categories? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 2) Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 21:40, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 3)  Some issues are still unanswered. Eurohunter (talk) 16:50, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
 * @Infsai @Eurohunter there's been no progress here in almost 3 months. Can this get wrapped up soon? RoySmith (talk) 15:38, 6 November 2023 (UTC)