Talk:Hang with Me/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing the article. — Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Basic checks
 * No Dab links.
 * One redirect link. Rolling Stone links change their address sometimes. Try archiving the link using WebCite and add it to the article (using "archiveurl" and "archivedate" field).


 * The cover art Image:Robyn - Hang with Me.jpg is a little big. Reduce it to 300 × 300 pixels.


 * The sound sample File:Robyn Hang with Me.OGG looks good.

Prose review will be added in shortly. — Novice7 (talk) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * taken from her sixth studio album, Body Talk Pt. 2 – maybe year of the album should be included in brackets?


 * It was released as the album's lead single on 16 August 2010 in Sweden. – comma after "in"


 * An acoustic version of the song had previously been released on Body Talk Pt. 1 in June 2010. – is it "released"? Shouldn't it be "included"? Also, comma afrer Pt. 1


 * It also reached the top ten in Norway and on the US Hot Dance Club Songs chart. – better if you expand and write "United States" instead of US, as it is its first occurrence. Also, remove the "on" after "and".


 * Background
 * "Hang with Me" was originally recorded by Klas Åhlund's ex-wife, Paola Bruna – ex-wife -> the-wife.
 * Sorry, it is "then-wife". — Novice7 (talk) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Comma after Stockcity Girl.


 * Maybe you should add something like "In an interview with Kyle Anderson of MTV Newsroom, Robyn said of the song.."
 * I believe that quote was originally from Robyn's website. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
 * It's okay then. — <b style="font-family:Arial; color:CornflowerBlue;">Novice7</b> (<b style="font-family:Arial; color:DodgerBlue;">talk</b>) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Also, link Bonbon?


 * Last sentence of the paragraph "released" to "included" or "featured".


 * Composition
 * The song carries similar "anthemic, emotional beats" of "Cry When You Get Older" from Body Talk Pt. 1,[7] and similar musical structure to that of the Pet Shop Boys. please rewrite.


 * As the lyrics of the song have been quoted, provide a source for that (as in In the chorus, Robyn sings "Just don't fall recklessly, headlessly in love with me.")


 * Critical reception
 * He concluded, saying, "it would..  -> He concluded by saying that it would "quoted material excluding it would".


 * Is stereogum reliable? Can you find another review?
 * Removed. Will see if I can find another review. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Chart performance
 * Please provide references to show the song's debut (as in Denmark).


 * remove "chart" after Billboard.


 * Music video
 * Again, stereogum.
 * Removed. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * She chose to perform the song because the show's producers asked for it a little re-write would be better :)


 * Tracklisting
 * Provide language parameter for iTunes Store links


 * Credits
 * Change the credits to [Person] – [credit]
 * Is it necessary? Klas Åhlund did, like, everything on the song :P Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
 * LOL! i totally misunderstood xD ✅. Pancake (talk) 13:13, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Lol, it's okay :D — <b style="font-family:Arial; color:CornflowerBlue;">Novice7</b> (<b style="font-family:Arial; color:DodgerBlue;">talk</b>) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Charts
 * Good


 * References
 * Ref 9 missing publisher (work =Rolling Stone)
 * Ref 12 missing publisher
 * Ref 29 same thing as above
 * All done. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Overall, a good article. — <b style="font-family:Arial; color:CornflowerBlue;">Novice7</b> (<b style="font-family:Arial; color:DodgerBlue;">talk</b>) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Last comments
 * Mention the duration of the sample on the description (like A 22-second sample).
 * I actually started liking the song. It's a great article. Just look through and see that all errors are fixed. I'll be happy to pass it then. — <b style="font-family:Arial; color:CornflowerBlue;">Novice7</b> (<b style="font-family:Arial; color:DodgerBlue;">talk</b>) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, all errors are fixed now! :)Pancake (talk) 14:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Happy to pass! :) — <b style="font-family:Arial; color:CornflowerBlue;">Novice7</b> (<b style="font-family:Arial; color:DodgerBlue;">talk</b>) 14:57, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Happy to pass! :) — <b style="font-family:Arial; color:CornflowerBlue;">Novice7</b> (<b style="font-family:Arial; color:DodgerBlue;">talk</b>) 14:57, 3 March 2011 (UTC)