Talk:Hanging by a Moment/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  15:18, 6 August 2011 (UTC)


 * I do think I can expand this article in the general seven days given to meet the good article criteria. Therefore, I believe it is appropriate to put this article on hold. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 16:04, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay, you have 7 days. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  16:16, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I have added a "Promotion" section which talks about Lifehouse's tours with Matchbox Twenty and 3 Doors Down. It also talks about their first headlining tour, and the dates that it occurred. Also, I have added quotes from Wade about the making of the music video and worked on the "Chart performance" section. Finally, I went through the entire article and fixed the many minor prose mistakes that were listed and that I found on my own. Saying this all, I do believe I have addressed all of your points. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 22:44, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Non-reviewer comments: Otherwise, good work expanding the article and hopefully it will be approved. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  23:36, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * The song was written by Lifehouse lead singer Jason Wade as the debut single for Lifehouse.[2] So what is being said here is that it was chosen to be the first single during the writing process? Adjust the wording. Doesn't make sense for something to be "written as a single".
 * Put "Lady Marmalade" in quotes and it isn't just Xtina's song.
 * Thanks for the comments. I truly appreciate them because they help me understand how to make Wikipedia better. I went ahead and fixed these mistakes. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 00:00, 10 August 2011 (UTC)

Okay, will go through everything tomorrow. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon! 21:30, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't think any of the Tour stuff is necessary, if anything, it should be on the parent album article. Also, you haven't include a work parameter for the MTV sources. The source is simply MTV, link the first instance only, and you will need to put .. around MTV so that it does not italicise. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  15:35, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I deleted the tour info and put it in the No Name Face article. I do not know how to not italicize the "work=" parameter, but did put MTV as the publisher and wiki-linked the first time it appeared in the "References" section. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 16:35, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * To make something not italicise in the work paramter, you just do this: MTV, it has the opposite effect and doesn't italicise. (Click 'edit' on this page to see what I typed) Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  16:41, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * All issues have now been addressed. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 20:04, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Ref [26], missed one. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  21:07, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Oops; must have missed that one. I do believe all issues have been addressed. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 22:08, 11 August 2011 (UTC)

'''Okay, I think you have now made the article worthy of being a GA. You have done everything which was asked of you to improve and expand the article, and it looks so much better now and it much better to read. Article is passed :).''' Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  22:42, 11 August 2011 (UTC)