Talk:Hank Crisp/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:05, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAG UAR   19:05, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The infobox image could do with a caption
 * "Crisp remained active at the University and served as director of intramural athletics through 1967" - no need for capitalisation here
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No original research found.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

The article's strongest point is that it is well sourced, and comprehensive for the subject matter. I see no reason to put this on hold, so I'll pass it now as it meets the criteria. JAG UAR   17:07, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you jaguar; not sure of a proper caption for the infobox. Cake (talk) 18:09, 25 November 2016 (UTC)