Talk:Hannah Steele Pettit

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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 22:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

peer edit
Capitalize "American" in first paragraph

Maybe remove specification that Hannah is a "female American astronomer", "American astronomer" would suffice.

Consistent use of her last name as two names "Steele Pettit" or just "Pettit"

Potentially combine Early Life and Personal Life sections into one... considering that they are both smaller sections, this might fit well at the top of the page where the Early Life section currently is.

In the Career section, maybe consider citing that information once (at the end of the paragraph) rather than throughout the paragraph, as the information in this section all comes from the same source.

If the information is available, clarify what her role was in the expeditions (i.e., data collection, note taking, imaging etc.)

Check punctuation rules after a citation (inconsistent placement of periods).

Make sure all sentences end with a period even if the sentence ends in a citation.

Nice work on the intro, concise and a good summary of important points.

Great encyclopedic language and neutrality.

Bfleming2 (talk) 17:20, 1 March 2018 (UTC)