Talk:Happy Bhag Jayegi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 09:42, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 09:42, 1 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "as the eponymous heroine Happy" — Just "as Happy" would do.
 * "bride to be" should be "bride-to-be"
 * Saurabh Goswami is mentioned as the cinematographer in the lead but not in the infobox. Please do so.
 * Best to remove the names of the cast members in the plot section.
 * "who decides to arrange for her deportation." — Can be rephrased as "who in turn decides to arrange for her deportation."
 * "Happy blackmails Bilal into helping her by using a contrived story accusing him and his father of human trafficking." — sounds a bit vague. Be a little more clearer on this.
 * "who initially suspects him of having an affair with Happy." — The plot doesn't explain when Zoya has a change of heart about her perception of Happy and Bilal having an affair.
 * "Bagga later realises the fraud as he helplessly" — Rephrase it as "Bagga later realises the sham when he helplessly"
 * "whispers something in the latter's ear" — Is it revealed later what it was? If not, it doesn't seem to be relevant enough.
 * It's similar to what happens at the end of Lost in Translation; it is an important detail because it is left to the viewers to interpret the scene in any possible way.


 * "It was Rai's first venture as a producer" — If this was his first venture then you can add a footnote about how Nil Battey Sannata released earlier.
 * Wikilink romantic drama.
 * "The former felt that the album had an "interesting mix of different styles" and dubbed it "memorable" in his review three and a half out if half star review for The Times of India." — Rephrase it as "The former, writing for The Times of India, gave the album three and a half out of five stars and felt that it had an "interesting mix of different styles" and dubbed it "memorable"."
 * Wikilink "salwar kamiz" and "pathani".
 * done; pathani suit has already been linked in the artcile.


 * Where's the source/URL for Masand's review?
 * "The performances of majority of the cast were well received by film critics." — Source?
 * "The performances of majority of the cast were well received by film critics. Penty was variously dubbed as "brimming with potential" and a "misfit"." — you can say it simply as "The performances of majority of the cast were well received by film critics, who dubbed Penty as "brimming with potential" and a "misfit"."
 * Since the second part is a mixed reaction, I'd rather keeo them separate.

Once these comments are addressed,, then I'll promote this article. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 09:01, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking up the review, I have hopefully addressed all your comments.  Vedant  Talk  10:46, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

The sources are good too. Nice work on the article,. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 14:48, 2 February 2018 (UTC)