Talk:Happy Go Ducky

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What's wrong with the article? Show me with a red text marked as an innapropriate tone. TobytheTramEngine 19:02, 25 May 2007 (UTC)


 * It's not a major problem, but the plot summary is not written in an encyclopaedic tone. It's easy to fix, and in fact I'll fix it right now. --DearPrudence 19:07, 25 May 2007 (UTC)


 * (sigh) I'm a silly speller! TobytheTramEngine 19:08, 25 May 2007 (UTC)


 * It's okay! I've fixed it and removed the templates from the top of the article. --DearPrudence 19:15, 25 May 2007 (UTC)


 * It's not really the spelling, it's the grammar, it's the sentence structure, but it's to be expected if you're not a native English speaker.MartinP1983 22:35, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

(sigh) My plots are always un-encyclopedic. Some I didn't write like The Dog House and Royal Cat Nap. However, any of your plots are interesting. TobytheTramEngine 19:44, 5 November 2007 (UTC)

Here's an example of what I mean: ''A bird gets shot and tells a history of birds. He tells about how birds exist and people trying to fly like them, Christopher Columbus and LF following a bird, EAP having troubles about a certain raven, birds in a song and still failures of vehicles trying to fly like birds''. TobytheTramEngine 20:46, 5 November 2007 (UTC)

It's referring to It's Tough to Be a Bird, in case any of you are wondering. TobytheTramEngine 23:59, 5 November 2007 (UTC)