Talk:Happy Now? (No Doubt song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:23, 10 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * 1997, as a -> 1997 as a
 * production handled -> production process being handled
 * This sounds a bit too wordy to me


 * of the parent -> of its parent
 * one calling -> one of them calling
 * I think you should remove the last sentence, as it sounds biased
 * I reworded it since the sentence was (unfortunately) the truth


 * Background and release
 * the second sentence is too long
 * Reworded


 * Again, remove the charting information
 * The CD single -> A CD single featuring the song
 * the LP version -> the album version
 * a Sublime cover of -> a cover of Sublime's
 * CD includes -> CD featured
 * would later be used -> would be later used


 * Composition and lyrics
 * the guitar lead -> its guitar-driven lead
 * The second sentence is excesive
 * lyrics, that -> lyrics that
 * Remove "All by yourself / You have no one else"
 * Since it was included in the review, I thought it necessary to be included here; I have reworded it


 * Critical reception
 * upon release -> upon its release
 * who wrote for The A.V. Club -> writing for The A.V. Club,
 * blog, similarly -> blog similarly


 * Release history
 * Unlink "CD single"


 * Outcome: On hold for seven days. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review as always; I have finished making changes! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 00:16, 14 June 2016 (UTC).
 * Passing article! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:50, 14 June 2016 (UTC)