Talk:Happy Refugees/GA1

GA Review
Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:44, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:44, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Please provide an alternative description "alt" for the image of the band included
 * You don't have to include a list for the past members, considering there is only one; please remove the bullet point

Lead

 * The correct form of verb in this sentence is actually "is", not "are"
 * Add "that" after "band from London,"
 * Who are they considered to be one of the last bands of the DIY era by? Please clarify here to prevent confusion
 * It's good that you include the information about comparisons here, but it should also be included below
 * This section could easily warrant a second paragraph listing the group's accomplishments, releases, and awards (in any) here; please expand

Paragraph 1

 * No comma is necessary after "Hamburger Boy"
 * Is the mention of The Colors Out of Time necessary since there is no article for it; if you find it necessary, please add a link to it so a future article may be warranted
 * "Paul Johnston, came along to..." → "Paul Johnston joined them to..."

Paragraph 2

 * This entire paragraph should be moved to the end of the first paragraph as it deals with what paragraph one is talking about

Paragraph 3

 * I know what you mean, but you should clarify on what "four-piece" means
 * If Warehouse Sound / Enshrined in a Memory is a single, it should be in quotation marks, not in italics
 * Expand on "underground acclaim"

Paragraph 4

 * This paragraph is good

Paragraph 1

 * "downloadable package" → "digital download"
 * The rest of this entire section is quite good

Influence

 * I believe this section should be retitled, perhaps something similar to "Influence and legacy"
 * This section could be greatly expanded, could it?

Members

 * Good! :)

Discography

 * I would recommend creating articles for these albums; yes I know it's by far not required, but it would be beneficial to both you and Wikipedia! :)
 * Include ";Studio albums" before listing them; but remove the quotation marks that I included in this example

End of GA Review:
This article needs quite a bit of expansion. I'm worried that this article isn't near being GA quality yet. I'm a bit worried about the notability of this subject, considering the minimal sources included in the article. If some expansion can be accomplished, I will definitely re-review the article, but as of now, some works needs to occur. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 00:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I am still relatively concerned with the notability of this subject; two days are left for changes to be made to this article. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 01:29, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Seven days have passed and I have noticed that the nominator hasn't edited for a few months; I'm afraid I'm going to fail this article. However, feel free to make the changes mentioned here and renominate it when you get the chance. Thank you! Carbrera (talk) 01:22, 8 April 2016 (UTC)