Talk:Harajuku Lovers Live/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Hello. I will be reviewing this article for the GA criterias. First of all I will be reviewing against quick-fail criterias.

Prose

 * --Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Verifiability

 * --Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Check for disambiguation and other dubious wikilinks

 * per. Please remove the disambiguations. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Fixed -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 15:23, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

Links validity check

 * per this. The link from The Guardian changes path. Needs to be replaced with original link. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Fixed -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 15:28, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

GA review

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Remove reference 4 to Rotten Tomatoes, those are by users and not professional. Done
 * Reference 21, please make the [] brackets as {}. Then the reference won't be broken. Done
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * The image HollabackGirl.jpg needs to be made right as per MOS:IMAGES. Also please add alternate text for the images as per WP:ALT.
 * Done both. The alt text on hollabackgirl was broken.
 * Mmmmm still not exactly satisfied with the alt text. Expecially the two performance pictures doesnot give any info other than the blond lady singing in the microphone. Try Sticky & Sweet Tour and check how they added the alternate text. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:13, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * How is that? I didn't know alt-text was supposed to be so detailed. -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 13:47, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * It is supposed to give the reader who can't see the image, as much information as possible regarding the image. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 03:36, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * How is that? I didn't know alt-text was supposed to be so detailed. -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 13:47, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * It is supposed to give the reader who can't see the image, as much information as possible regarding the image. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 03:36, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Over all a good article. We are almost there. --Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 09:56, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Fixed what you brought up. Thanks for the review. -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 13:29, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
 * We are ready to roll :) --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 09:12, 1 December 2009 (UTC)