Talk:Hard to Swallow/GA1

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 * Please split the lead into 2/3 paragraphs as per most album GA/FAs.
 * Not done? giggy (O) 04:29, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure if is a reliable source?
 * "which Van Winkle described" --> "which he described"?
 * Some Professional reviews dudes in infobox need italics (eg. NY Times).
 * "An example of the sound of Hard to Swallow." - this needs more info... describe what it sounds like, what reception of it was, how it relates to the article text...
 * "In the early stages of the album's development, Hard to Swallow was initially" - redundancies
 * Not done? giggy (O) 04:27, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed. (Ibaranoff24 (talk) 06:14, 25 June 2008 (UTC))


 * "Van Winkle stated of working with Ross Robinson, "The vibe was totally so cool. We had the album finished in a month and a half because we kept the vibe."" - what's that got to do with the rest of this paragraph?
 * Not done? giggy (O) 04:27, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed. (Ibaranoff24 (talk) 06:14, 25 June 2008 (UTC))

And please leave me a note when done. Cheers, giggy (O) 02:38, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Reception section needs plenty of expansion.


 * Commercial reaction also needs including, did it sell 3 copies or 3 million? Since I imagine there isnt much to write on this, it would be nice to compare it to his previous records. — Realist 2  ( Come Speak To Me ) 04:14, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * The only website I could find with an exact sales figure is this fansite, which claims that it sold 100,000 copies. I couldn't find any verifiable sources discussing the album's sales. (Ibaranoff24 (talk) 07:45, 23 June 2008 (UTC))
 * Could you give a table of chart positions then, if it didnt sell many copies. Im sure it landed somewhere within the Billboard 200. — Realist 2  ( Who's Bad? ) 05:15, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Neither Billboard's website nor All Music Guide have any chart information for the album. (Ibaranoff24 (talk) 06:10, 25 June 2008 (UTC))


 * "who had worked with bands such as Deftones, Korn, and Sepultura." why is this so important to warrant inclusion in the lead? Can we get a slightly bigger (since 300 x 300 is the max allowed) album cover without the parental advisory label? indopug (talk) 12:54, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't think that it's really necessary to upload a larger version of the cover. In any case, I've been unable to find a version without the PA. (Ibaranoff24 (talk) 07:34, 23 June 2008 (UTC))