Talk:Hardcore Holly/GA1

GA Review
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I'll review this article against GA criteria.  Royal broil  05:34, 7 March 2009 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Sources appear reliable enough at the Good Article level, but SLAM! Sports and IGN would probably be questioned at FA level if you decide to go that route.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * Looks good - little editing in the past few weeks.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Very well done! Lots of impressive pictures with suitable copyright and captions document his career. The oldest (1996) picture should have the year in the caption.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Very well done! Lots of impressive pictures with suitable copyright and captions document his career. The oldest (1996) picture should have the year in the caption.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Specific comments

 * The month (January) of the 1995 Royal Rumble would be helpful for more context.


 * wikilink to The Border Patrol. It's good to have redlinks if the article doesn't exist, they are opportunities to grow! If someone complains, tell them to see WP:REDLINK. I never heard of them, and the reader might be interested to find out who they are/were.


 * Please source "Holly made a surprise appearance at WWE's Extreme Championship Wrestling house show event on August 21, 2006 in Allentown, Pennsylvania, defeating Balls Mahoney."


 * "When Sabu was found kayfabe unconscious in the back before the" - "the back"? - the back of what? In the dressing rooms? Behind the scenes?


 * "he was chosen as his replacement" - too many he's - do you mean that Holly was chosen as his replacement?

Wow, that's it! A very well written and interesting article! You're a few small edits from the green plus.  Royal broil  13:11, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * All done! ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:28, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * One of the shortest hold periods in GA history! It passes.  Royal broil  13:34, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Thank you so much for the review! ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:36, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Yay, Bob is finally notable in some way. --Kaizer13 (talk) 18:13, 7 March 2009 (UTC)