Talk:Harlem Park Three/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: WritingAboutCreepypastas (talk · contribs) 13:31, 5 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Note: Nominator has told me on Discord that they are fixing up some rough edges. WritingAboutCreepypastas (talk) 15:34, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
 * @Queen of Hearts: Would you like to start the review? WritingAboutCreepypastas (talk) 08:27, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
 * WritingAboutCreepypastas, you've caught me at the wrong time. I've been suffering from unexpected medical issues. If I don't start this by the end of the week, please close this as unsuccessful. Queen   of   Hearts ❤️  (no relation) 18:04, 13 December 2023 (UTC)

This looks good and the text was very easy-to-follow. I removed some contractions, but other than that it should be good for GA pending some spotchecks. Comprehensiveness isn't in the purview of GA, but I wondered if there was more about the case considering there are only 11 refs?
 * It's been almost 2 weeks, I lost interest, real life got in the way, . I might later resubmit this in a better state. Queen   of   Hearts ❤️  (she/they 🎄 🏳️‍⚧️) 05:20, 17 December 2023 (UTC)