Talk:Harmohinder Singh Gill

Re-write lead paragraphs
Recommendation: The opening paragraphs (often called the "lede") are too long and involve too much family heritage. The essential facts about Gill should be set forth as a concise overview. Most importantly, in this article, the importance is that he was a plant pathologist at UCR, noted for his work in certain pathogens. For more information on proper article structure, see WP:LEDE. Thanks. – S. Rich (talk) 16:43, 10 September 2014 (UTC)