Talk:Harold Agnew/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 13:30, 26 October 2013 (UTC)


 * I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 13:30, 26 October 2013 (UTC)


 * No DAB links, no dead links. The source url for the badge images, the infobox image, and the "30 years of service" image is not specific enough.
 * They've just been taken down at the original site. Fortunately, we archived them on Commons. Added link to archive site.
 * Ref 26 needs an ndash. Ref 1 needs a page range ndash.
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * The PDF file references could use a "|format=PDF" parameter.
 * Why? They have the PDF icon. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you justify the reliability of the "Nuclear Diner" reference?
 * It's just about where his ashes are. The site is a blog, run by three women who have worked at LASL. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * "Cockcroft-Walton" needs an ndash.
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * "From 1961 to 1964" watch caps
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Nothing on his death in the lead?
 * It's right there in the first sentence.
 * A sentence on his death would be beneficial to summarize the "later life" section and give closure to the lead. Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * "He witnessing the" past here
 * Correct. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you link "telemetering" somewhere, or explain what it is?
 * Yes, there is an article on it. Linked. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * "Fellow postgraduate student" plural here
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * I would like to hear more on when he served as a Senator for New Mexico. Certainly there's more on what he supported and his actions in the Senate.
 * So would I. Got a source? Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Have you looked for sources? Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes. That's where I got the rest of the article from. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * I could not find much, but I added what little I had. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:30, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you link "Eastern bloc" somewhere?
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Wall Street Journal needs italics
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
 * "illegal means.". double period.
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)

Other than the Senator issue, most concerns are minor and fixable. I will re-look when these issues are responded to. Seattle (talk) 13:52, 27 October 2013 (UTC)


 * Meets GA criteria after a re-look. Passing. Seattle (talk) 15:42, 29 October 2013 (UTC)