Talk:Harold Keith Johnson

Strange intro paragraph
It seems strange for an introductory paragraph to jump right in and focus on the particulars of a general's views on the strategy of the Vietnam war. I think it would be more helpful to give a brief biopic and insert the Vietnam info later. If it's really the major feature of this career, it could still go in the top section, otherwise it could go under a "Vietnam Years" heading. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikeblyth (talk • contribs) 14:34, 15 October 2018 (UTC)