Talk:Harriet Jones/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 15:43, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

I like this character (probably influenced by my fondness of the actress!). I won't be able to get to this until Friday or Saturday (at the earliest) though.  Ruby  2010/  2013  15:43, 17 October 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * Perhaps mention the years she was in the series earlier in the lead?
 * introduces, a running joke - unnecessary comma
 * Despite being introduced as fair minded and hard working, the character - make clear you're talking about Harriet here
 * is killed off in the penultimate episode of the - link of this episode?
 * Make sure direct quotes are immediately followed by citations
 * No need to link Eccleston more than once in article body
 * I got to sacrifice myself to save the world." [8] - unnecessary space
 * Collinson "[couldn't] bear the thought she's dead" - did he actually say that, or is that what someone else attributed to him?
 * death and Davies stated - add comma after death
 * Use single quote marks within quotations (" vs. ')
 * I assume Davies intended for Harriet to reflect Margaret Thatcher (what with the Doctor's "looking old" line); perhaps add something about this to the production section? Currently all that is said about it is what critics are reading into it

My Comments -- Oh I loved the ending where she blew up that ship! Spot-on as you Brits like to say! I didn't think the story was a anti-war message, I thought it was right down the middle. Both reasonable sides (Hawk/Dove) were presented and for the record, I would have done exactly the same thing. It was also a good way to introduction Torchwood. It is a shame that Torchwood was so violent. Torchwood was a great idea but to much blood was spilled. --68.118.188.188 (talk) 19:40, 4 July 2014 (UTC)

oh, and for the main picture, it would be fabulous if you got one of her showing her ID!--68.118.188.188 (talk) 19:41, 4 July 2014 (UTC)

Seems comprehensive and no issues on images. Well done with the prose, just a few minor nitpicks above. I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Nice work!  Ruby  2010/  2013  22:17, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * P.S. Eshlare, don't forget about Esther Drummond. Glimmer721  talk  01:51, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

I made a few more tweaks, and the article now looks ready for GA status. Nice work!  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:16, 13 November 2012 (UTC)