Talk:Harry Arter/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 17:50, 26 October 2018 (UTC)


 * I'll do this one as well. Courcelles (talk) 17:50, 26 October 2018 (UTC)


 * "professional debutdebut" - Fixed
 * Link or explain "non-league" in the lead. - Linked
 * "chronic tendonitis in his achilles and he eventually ruptured the muscle" Could use some wikilinks for context, and as the Achilles is a tendon, which muscle are you referring to here? - Added link and reworded
 * "fitness, struggled to break" fitness, he struggled. - Fixed
 * "afterwas" is not a word - Fixed
 * Could use a link to explain "He was booked" or clarify that means a yellow card. - Linked
 * Could use a link to hernia. - Linked
 * Phrases like "added time" and "extra time" could likely link somewhere too... people might not be aware those are different things. - Linked
 * "Overall, he scored 5 goals in 34 league matches during the season as Bournemouth finished in eleventh place" Don't use two number formats in one sentence. - Fixed
 * "for the penultimate game" Should that "for" be "in" instead? - Done
 * " he was ruled out until October" Any idea why? Source only states it was an injury so I've included that
 * "the result came only 1 week after fellow south coast club Southampton had beaten Sunderland 8–0." What's the relevance of this? - Removed
 * "teammate- describing" I think this should be an unspaced emdash or a spaced endash, certainly not a unspaced then spaced hyphen. - Done
 * "PFA Player of the Month" What is the PFA? - Done
 * "This was the first time Bournemouth had been promoted into England's top flight in the club's 125-year history." No citation for this? - Done
 * "to rest first several weeks" to rest for the first? - Done
 * "1– defeat" It's obvious that has to be a 0, but it's missing. - Done
 * "2– victory" Missing the other score again. - Done
 * "he "real strength" Do we need a "had" here? - Done
 * " action to early." Too. - Done
 * "thethe season" - Done
 * We're about a third through the season now, aren't we? What's he done for Cardiff?
 * I've marginally expanded the section but there hasn't been too much of note really yet, no goals, no assists, no controversial incidents to speak of.


 * "under15" could use the hyphen like the rest" - Done
 * "He made his full international debut against the Netherlands in a 1–1 draw in Dublin on 27 May 2016, in which he was awarded man of the match. " Citation? - Done
 * Any info on why (and how he's eligible) to play for the ROI?
 * He's eligible through his grandparents, mentioned at the end of the first sentence of the section.


 * That's all I've got. Courcelles (talk) 18:27, 26 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for another review, I've made a quick start here. Kosack (talk) 20:29, 26 October 2018 (UTC)
 * I've responded to all of the issues raised above, let me know any thoughts you have. Kosack (talk) 09:42, 27 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good. I added a wikilink in one place.  Good work, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 13:56, 27 October 2018 (UTC)